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I wrote this story when I was eight years old. 

BRYAN RANVILLE

AND THE TRAPS OF TENCALL

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CHAPTER 1: BRYAN’S BIRTH

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Bob and Rosa married and had a child named Bryan.  He was born in the Vampire  Hospital. Bryan was a vampire and lived in a world called the Vamptropolis, a different place from the earth. Vampires only thought humans were myths, and nobody lived on earth.  Vampires created fictional stories about humans, and they were published.  Since vampires have the morning at night, and vampire scientists made drones to search for humans in their day. But since humans are awake at day and sleep at night, the drones couldn't see any humans on earth. 

 

"He has such beautiful brown hair like me," said Rosa. 

 

"He looks just like Daddy," said Bob, combing his black hair.

 

"Goo Goo Gaa Gaa," yelled Bryan.

 

"Mommy's little baby wants milky?" asked Rosa.

 

"Gaa Goo," cooed Bryan.

 

"Alrighty Bryan, here is your milk," said Mom, giving him his bottled milk. 

 

Bryan burped and drank his milk.  

 

Months passed quickly. Bryan was almost one year old already, and Rosa felt some pain in her stomach. When Bob took Rosa to the doctor about her stomach pain, she then found out she was going to have a baby in eight to nine months. 

 

Eight months later, Rosa was born. Bob and two-year-old Bryan were going to the hospital.

 

When they got to the hospital, Bob and Bryan had to wait for five to seven hours while the doctors were taking the baby out, and when they went in, they realized it was a baby girl.

 

"Heather, that should be her name", said Rosa, "Bryan!! Meet your sister, Heather."

 

Bryan said, "Ooh!". Then he waved and smiled at Heather.

 

Four weeks later, one night, Dark Lord had come to Bob's and Rosa's house. He opened the door.  Dark Lord was a dark vampire that had dark, thin-lined hair with a bony, pale-faced, face with dark black eyes with two, sharp, edgy fangs that always stick out of his teeth and wears a dark black sweater with dark black pants and a dark black cloak so people cannot see his  facial appearances even if he is in the light, 

 

"Where is Bryan Ranville?" he asked scarily.

 

"I will not give him to you, Lord of the Dark," said Bob Ranville firmly.

 

Rosa and Bob Ranville tried to run upstairs, but Dark Lord got a hold of Bob. Rosa did not notice it.

 

"Where is Bobby?", she asked panting when she got Bryan and Heather from their cribs. She ran out panicking.

 

"ABRA CAMARA!!" yelled Dark Lord, and Bob dies. He had sacrificed himself. 

 

“B-o-o-b-b!!!”, cried Rosa.

 

"Dada, not moving!!! Dada sleeping?" Bryan cried. Heather started crying, not knowing what was happening.

 

Days flew by nine years went by like a blink of an eye. Heather just turned nine, and Bryan was 11  years old now.  Both brother and sister started to go to Blood Trip Elementary School. 

 

When Bryan got out of bed, his eyes were weak, even when he put his glasses on, and he looked up at the picture of Bob. He remembered that it was the ninth death anniversary of his father. He said sadly, "I miss you, dad, but I will try to make you proud ." Then a thought came to his head. The thought was controlling him like a puppet, and he was taking the photo and dropping into the ground.

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